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Comment on A Great Disappointment to Me by Cris Ferreira

Cris Ferreira — Wed, 22 Feb 2012 21:49:03 +0000

I liked how you developed the story, and close it like it began, but with a different tone to it. Very well done.

Comment on A Great Disappointment to Me by Hazel Moon

Hazel Moon — Wed, 22 Feb 2012 08:16:53 +0000

Great Story from start to finish. I liked the final Put down, but this time it did not hurt but made him proud!

Comment on Of Gold and Good Advice by The Way Sunday School Class at FUMC Pensacola | Participatory Bible Study Blog

Sun, 12 Feb 2012 15:00:48 +0000

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Comment on Of Gold and Good Advice by Henry Neufeld

Henry Neufeld — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 16:24:37 +0000

Well, I wrote the story as a response to Psalm 19 for my Sunday School class. This was one of several. The idea was to start discussing.

We discussed several questions including whether one would be likely to find two people out of any three who would choose a wise saying over a bag of gold, and whether this relates at all to the quoted text. I intended that to be questionable. How similar is the wise saying to God’s word?

In any case, I guess I’d have to say I intended readers to be dissatisfied!

Comment on Of Gold and Good Advice by ladysown

ladysown — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 12:49:04 +0000

that just left me wanting “more”…. so i’m feeling rather dissatisfied…there should be more…

Comment on Of Gold and Good Advice by Christian Carnival 01:27:2012 | INSPIKS

Christian Carnival 01:27:2012 | INSPIKS — Fri, 27 Jan 2012 12:23:50 +0000

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Comment on A Fresh Perspective – I by Joanne Norton

Joanne Norton — Wed, 18 Jan 2012 02:25:03 +0000

Hmm. Lots of good thinking going on here. What’s funny? When the description began, I was “seeing” the Columbia River from The Dalles to Portland with some side pictures. Much happened with the wagon trains, side cliffs, and stretches of the river. And engineers are so stuffy… I can say that with a grin, b/c my husband would have been an electrical engineer if he hadn’t changed majors in college to computer for the AF ROTC scholarship. [HE WOULD NEVER HAVE ACTED LIKE THAT!! He's too sweet.]

Comment on A Fresh Perspective – I by Hazel Moon

Hazel Moon — Tue, 10 Jan 2012 22:41:45 +0000

Too bad the engineer was not a hunting guide instead.
The engineer was only thinking of his commission.
The committee usually does not desire suggestions from the floor!

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A Fresh Perspective – I « Jevlir Caravansary — Tue, 10 Jan 2012 21:01:58 +0000

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A Fresh Perspective – II « Jevlir Caravansary — Tue, 10 Jan 2012 20:55:49 +0000

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